In class we are making books based off authors. Our author was Lynley Dodd. We had to make a character name and description that rhymed and this was mine and Ellie's.
Kia Ora Abby, My name is Julia and I am a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
I think that this is a really good post and I can see how this is to do with Lynley Dodd's 'Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's Dairy'. Just a quick Grammar tip 'with his best friend Rascal 'who' lives in a castle', if you can notice I added who and next time you could remember that. Apart from that awesome post.
I really enjoyed this blog post. But I think you could have done a little bit more writing. I just found something funny, my sisters name is Abigail but we call her Abbey for short. I like how you put the Author's name in the blog post.
Hi Abby, I really liked this post. What did you use to make the picture? Next maybe use something different to present you work. Otherwise I really like looking forward to reading more of you post.
Kia ora Abby, My name is Faith I am a student at Waikowhai Primary School. I love the outline that you did of the dog it looks really realistic. This work reminds me of when we did the poster that we did about our oceans and polluting. Maybe next time you could add more detail about the dog that you did.
Talofa Abby,My name is James and I'm a student from Waikowhai Primary school. I love the picture of the dog that you drew on google drawing.This makes me think about when we had to draw the main characters and the setting. Maybe next time you could write a little more about what you did and when did you do it. If you are free you can visit my blog, here it is http://wpsjamesp.blogspot.com/. Anyway keep it up.
Hi Abby its Ian from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI like how you made the dog on the drawing.
Maybe next time you could add why you posted this.
Did you enjoy doing this ?
Kind regards Ian.
Kia Ora Abby, My name is Julia and I am a year 7 student from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI think that this is a really good post and I can see how this is to do with Lynley Dodd's 'Hairy Maclary from Donaldson's Dairy'. Just a quick Grammar tip 'with his best friend Rascal 'who' lives in a castle', if you can notice I added who and next time you could remember that. Apart from that awesome post.
Kind Regards
Julia
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Abby,
ReplyDeleteI'm Gracie from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really enjoyed this blog post. But I think you could have done a little bit more writing. I just found something funny, my sisters name is Abigail but we call her Abbey for short. I like how you put the Author's name in the blog post.
Kind Regards
Gracie
Yaldhurst Model School
Hi Abby,
ReplyDeleteI really liked this post. What did you use to make the picture?
Next maybe use something different to present you work. Otherwise I really like looking forward to reading more of you post.
Bree
Yaldhurst model school
Hello Abby,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lucinda i go to papakura central school like you.
and i really like what you made the pitcher on google draw.
from Lucinda
Hi there Abby, My name is Abby and I am a year 6 at Yaldhurst Model School, YMS for short.
ReplyDeleteI like the way the dog looks and your rymes, what kind of tools did you use to make it?
This reminds me of when my class were making alot of poems. Would you do this again?
Next time you could make the sky and grass by your self and maybe add color to where the words are if you can.
Kind Regards,
Abby.
Kia ora Abby, My name is Faith I am a student at Waikowhai Primary School. I love the outline that you did of the dog it looks really realistic. This work reminds me of when we did the poster that we did about our oceans and polluting. Maybe next time you could add more detail about the dog that you did.
ReplyDeleteTalofa Abby,My name is James and I'm a student from Waikowhai Primary school. I love the picture of the dog that you drew on google drawing.This makes me think about when we had to draw the main characters and the setting. Maybe next time you could write a little more about what you did and when did you do it. If you are free you can visit my blog, here it is http://wpsjamesp.blogspot.com/. Anyway keep it up.
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