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Wednesday, 28 March 2018

My dad and I

this is a poem about Me and my Dad. we flowed a template in my class and made these.
My dad and I
We are ice cream people
My Dad and I
People ran
Monkey-like
Around the shop
Until they got there ice cream.

We are building site people
My Dad and I
Builder’s-stunk
Skunk like
On the building site
Until they went home.

We are dog people
My Dad and I
Chasing frankie
Cheetah-like
Around the shop
Until she got her bath.

We are busy people
My Dad and I
Running round
Dog- like
In Papakura
Until the jobs were done.

We are ice cream people
We are building site people
We are dog people
We are busy people
   My Dad and I
When dad

    isn’t working so hard

2 comments:

  1. Hi Abby
    I really like the poem.
    maybe next time you could start with different sentence starters.
    Kind regards Ana

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  2. Hi, My name is charlotte I am from papakura central school
    I really like your poem.

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